Dark Eden

toiling up the slope behind us in the darkness. We’d been walking through Dark the length of two long wakings. We’d twice heard leopards and had to scream and yell to scare them away.
    ‘Quick! Quick!’ I yelled down. ‘We’ve done it! We’ve made it! We’re okay!’
    I turned to look down again at forest below us.
    ‘Just look at it, Jeff. Tom’s dick, just bloody
look
at it! On and on!’
    As each of the others reached the top, they shouted angrily.
    ‘You two were
way
too far ahead! You should have bloody waited for us! What would have happened if a leopard had come?’
    But, when they saw what was laid below them, they fell silent, just like me and Jeff had done.
    Never mind little Tall Tree Valley, this made
Circle
Valley look tiny and closed-in. Both those places were really just little splat holes in Snowy Dark. But this wasn’t a splat hole. It wasn’t just another valley. It was a whole world. Everyone could see that. Everyone.
    ‘Weird to think Family stayed in that one little place for a hundred and sixty bloody
years
,’ Gela Brooklyn said, rubbing her pregnant belly, ‘when all of this was so near.’ ‘Tom’s neck, John!’ Gerry shouted excitedly, coming up next to me, putting his arm round my shoulders and leaning his head against mine. ‘You did it! You bloody did it! You are brilliant brilliant, John. You’re great.’
    He was proud of me again, as proud of me as he had been when I did for the leopard.
    In fact they were
all
proud of me.
    ‘You made this happen,’ Tina said, coming over beside me too, and slipping her arm round my waist. ‘You started this all by yourself and made it happen.’
    We still had our headwraps on to keep out the cold, so we were like some kind of weird two-legged bucks standing up there in the snow, and it was dark dark too, but in the light of Def’s headlantern I could see Tina’s shiny eyes looking at me out of the holes in the buckskin.
    ‘You bloody did it, John!’ said Gerry again.
    ‘To think I was about to say we should turn back,’ said Janny, looking down at the thousand thousand lights below. ‘To think my Flower could have grown up in bloody old Tall Tree Valley, when all this was waiting for us.’
    And then suddenly she pulled off her headwrap and mine too, so she could give me a wet batface kiss.
    ‘Well, if Janny’s going to kiss you, I will too!’ Tina said, yanking off her own headwrap. Our skins were all pink and sticky from being inside the wraps, and she kissed me slowly with her mouth open, like a kiss before a slip. The others cheered us on.
    They’d never been pleased with me like this. Even when they first came over to me at Valley Neck – and that was long
long
before Suzie died, long before I’d got them lost and Jeff had had to save them – they’d grumbled as if I’d
made
them come, as if all that they’d given up was my fault and nothing to do with them. But now, when me and Jeff had forced them to keep going and risked their lives by pushing on ahead with their only source of light, they were pleased pleased pleased.
    It felt good good, but even better than their praise was the sight of Wide Forest itself stretching away down there, with no Dark to make an edge to it, except for the Dark we were standing on.
    Far off in the distance, I noticed, the light of Wide Forest changed. There was a kind of winding edge between the twinkly light of the trees below, which was like the light of Circle Valley, and a softer, smoother, more even light, which was more like the light that comes out of a stream or a pool.
    ‘That couldn’t all be water over there, surely?’ I said to myself. It didn’t seem possible, and yet I remembered stories of such a thing on Earth, a pool that was bigger than all the dry ground put together. The C, it was called for short, but no one in Eden knew any more what that had stood for.
    ‘Think of bloody old Mehmet and the other five,’ said Dix with a snort of laughter, ‘stuck back up there on their own in Tall Tree Valley, figuring out how to keep warm next time it snows.’
    ‘Yeah,’ shouted Harry. ‘Ha ha! Sitting by themselves in the snow.’
    He laughed and laughed, as Harry sometimes did, going on until it was almost like it was hurting him or he was having a fit. It often got on people’s nerves so much that they ended up telling him to bloody shut up, and then he’d get upset, which was even noisier and more annoying than his laugh. But this time everyone